First post posted and my first draft essay

So there was a mistake in the last but nevermind here is the first draft of my UNFINISHED essay so tell me what you think if you like or think its true then comment and share thx. oh and changing my name to Mike Master Million.

A lot of violent video games have a global affect. A few years ago a person went

on a One-man-killing spree in Germany and he killed a lot of people, yes indeed

he played these brutal games. People that play these games sometime in their

lives come to a point where they can tell a difference between the real world

and the gaming world. They then start thinking they are in a game and injure,

kill or even cripple the affected people for their rest of their life. They are not

able to notice the difference and think the person will come back alive. This can

be stopped if the violent games are a even higher age restriction. If the games

are sold at a higher age the customer is most likely to see the difference of the

real and the fake world. The violent should be sold at the age of 25 and above. It

doesn’t if the parent agrees the customer or teenager has to be as old as the age

restriction. If this were a law